schizophranic's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Distant Rock]

Wow!

All in all very virtuoso song. But it's not catchy. I really don't have a clue about guitar playing thus I can't say if it a heavy part you're playing.

Nonetheless it's getting boring. You should work more with the drums. Some breaks for example. Use toms, snare fills, cymbals not only the standard base snare hihat combination and this is going to be a great song! Furthermore try to make the song recognizable as a song. I mean put in a red line which the song is following.
The work you put in this is fitting into a whole song as solo, you know?

[.Trippin the Trip]

Don't you think?

Don't you think this little fast parts aren't overloaded? Somehow in my ears it sounded as if there was too much you wanted people to hear, you know what I mean?
The begining was great, but when the synth begins it becomes quite unrecognizable which one of 'em should be the lead and wich one support.

I liked the floating parts! Really really awsome work^^

Manhart responds:

I was trying to make it interesting by making several melodies combined. But I fully understand how you feel about it. I will try and make a more focused version of it. It will be longer though. Thanks for the review :)

[**Insomnia**]

quite simple...

You made up a interesting piece of work at the begining. This was really something that was worth listening, but the technopart has a awfully poor quality if we talk about things like rythm. It's getting so simple. Even primitive. This had something of Mallorca style when you understand. Um ts clap ts um ts clap ts... Nothing really intersting^^

But as I said. The pianopart war great work. It was not simple, it CREATED an atmosphere.

DisconnectedFromGame responds:

Well I'm trying to use the KISS principle with my music now, because I literally go nuts when it comes to making all these different instruments with the same octaves. Even I have no idea whats going on.

(And I totally know what you mean about the beat, VERY overused, I just thought I'd try it out. Guess it still sucks haha.)

[rOw_Far From the Light]

Not bad but...

but... you mixed a song that is minimal at first and then turns to something... I don't even know how to call it... some sort'a trance... hard te say...

Bad luck... you shouldn't mixe up to completly different atmosphere in your songs^^

[Praise The Sunshine]

hmpf...

Great work, but the main theme of this song's getting annoying with time passing.

I mean 80% is dam dadam dadam daaaa daaaa.
But the rest is well done.

Keep it up^^

[Fragile Heart [7000]]

Nice!

Flow goes^^

Great work man! The volumen proportions of all intruments are perfect. The breaks work well. But unfortunately it's too short to be enjoyed in fill extend!

Sirhc7000 responds:

hehe sorry bout that...I just like to keep it short for some reason :/

Thx for the review!!

[Other Side.]

ay... same drum/bassline...

Very unconvenient... I know in fact there's no problem with using such things in 2 different songs, but i don't like it quite well, yeh, know?

But that's not the point. I give you 6 stars with this review to show you my dislike, but the song still is well done, so I voted 4^^

PR0FAN1TY responds:

Yeah i guess i can see where you are coming from, now that i think about it seems really kinda of slack of me, but id had been dying to get a track done since generate vip.

Im glad you liked it tho and that you were honest.

[Curb Stomper]

Lovley composotion!

I love it, when a song is made of a few sounds which permanently vary in composition and flow! That's high standard! Really great job! Or even awsome^^ Also have to admit the atmosphere the song's creating is special. But I'd never could listen to this for a ling time. Once or twice ok, but then it'll get quite annoying, although for a flash submission of some spy or headhunter it would fit perfectly!

[(NUB)Dog-Walk Demon Battle]

Percussion and 8-bit great!

Both were awsome! But it doesn't fit together unfortunately.

But still great work!

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