00:00
00:00
View Profile schizophranic

39 Audio Reviews

19 w/ Responses

Enjoyable^^

Makes me flow with my thoughts without caring where they go.

Sweet violin, soft piano sounds and a driving drum line which makes everything go on and on and on.
But try to add some acid-samples in the background that would make it perfect in my opinoin^^

So I really enjoyed this!

Manhart responds:

Thanks a lot for the review.
The song works the exact same way for me, so I am glad it works same way for you too :)
I am not sure what you mean by acid-samples. Could you show me what you mean?

At first^^

Your first heartbeat before the rain starts sounds more like a basedrum, which it obviously is^^ Later on this isn't so obviouse because the rain sound is drwoning the high frequencies of the drum^^ But when you just cut out the high frequencies and pitch it down for some semitones, this is going to be a masterful heartbeat.

For certain flashes^^

No problem when you want it to be used on several flashes here on newgrounds, but as a song to listen to it, it's not so siutable in my ears^^

The happy (I guess you wanted it to be 8-bit music, because it sounds like that^^) melody and the heavy drum line make the song somehow special and worth listening, but the contrast is too big to make it sound like it would perfectly fit together^^

As already said^^

Try getting better classical intruments and try to use a little bit more release and hall effects on certain sounds. That makes everything much more impressive^^
All in all well done. Could listen to it for a very ling time without getting bored^^

A lot of work!

Yeh have te learn a little bit more about how you make things sound like one song and not a random bunch of sounds that are mixed up in one song^^

Kamun responds:

I'm going to be working with OpenMPT.. I just need to learn the basics of it first.

Nice!

Nice work!

You made up a very fine song! It's right, the Hall and echo effects on the piano fit perfectly to the atmosphere of the song. Also you came up with some very interesting rythms especially on the piano. I see you concentrated a lot on it and it's worth it but unfortunately you neglected the drum patterns^^
The bass drives a cool groove, but it's a little bit to rough in my ears. Dunno... just my opinion^^

Keep up the good work!

Funkyfists responds:

Thankyou! Actually i have many more patterns but the piano was my main focus. After experimentation, i figured a basic beat to keep the song going was the way to go... Thankyou for the feedback. In future songs i will try to keep the drums interesting...

Like it!

It's a nice piece of work, although it's a very poppy style you use on this track, but i guess you wanted it to sound like that.

Actually I don't like mixing up piano (similar) instruments with synths, but you handled that task quite well. Mostly I think i enjoyed the more peaceful part at about 2:10^^

All in all great song^^

Oh yeah!

That's the stuff^^

Keep up that work^^ Do more and more and more and there will be a diectory on my notebook called Flawless Empire!

Flawlessempire responds:

Thanks man, Can't wait!

I have motivation!

Great!

I love it!

Powerfull! Motivating! It's motion in my ears^^ More of it!!!

Flawlessempire responds:

Ask and you shall receive!

Thanks man!

Age 36, Male

Munich

Joined on 7/25/09

Level:
5
Exp Points:
271 / 280
Exp Rank:
> 100,000
Vote Power:
4.49 votes
Rank:
Civilian
Global Rank:
> 100,000
Blams:
5
Saves:
25
B/P Bonus:
0%
Whistle:
Normal
Medals:
14